#BlogBattle Week 7 theme: Cosmic
Cosmic: a fan-fiction (Doctor Who #10)
I had been fretting all week about my story. The word was cosmic. My mom had been bothering me all week about it.
“You’ve got to write your cosmic story, you’ve got to write your cosmic story,” she sang. I didn’t remember the rest of what she sang. When I asked, she was all, “write your cosmic storeeeeeeee!” in her ‘opera voice’. Well here it is mom, my cosmic story. ((Mom: I LOVE THIS GIRL))
Cosmic (inconceivably vast)
Inconceivable! I thought to myself, sitting in English class. “Cosmic; unimaginably vast,” my teacher, Mrs. Lind explained. I hate spelling tests, but this word made me think of something I experienced not long ago. In fact, it was the summer of my fifteenth birthday.
I heard a groaning, wheezing sound coming from behind me. I turned around and saw a box, an old police box that just appeared. I inched toward it, not wanting to be in the woods any longer. I had ‘lost’ my hiking group in the middle of nowhere. A man stepped out; he was wearing a long tan overcoat and converses.
“I am the Doctor,” he said. My jaw dropped open. My mother, Martha Jones, had told me fairy tales about a man who called himself The Doctor.
“Martha?” He questioned.
“My mother?”
He looked disappointed, but smiled and asked, “have you heard of me?”
I nodded.
“Would you like a ride?” I nodded again and stepped into what I thought to be the TARDIS.
I heard a strange language coming from the speaker. “Allonsy!” I toppled to the floor, he opened the door, and I peeked over his shoulder just to see an empty hallway. He grabbed my hand and pulled me out of the Tardis.
Suddenly, a metal can rolled around the corner. It glanced at the doctor and screeched “You are the Doctor! You are the enemy of the Daleks! Exterminate! Exterminate!”
He pulled out something that looked like a pen. I stared in disbelief. “You are defending us with that?!”
“I know, it could be a little more sonic,” he replied. He pointed it at what I now realized to be a Dalek.
KABLAM!
The tin can exploded, sparking sparks everywhere. We ran for it, and Ten dragged me into the TARDIS. As I stepped out and said fare-well I saw my mother there her mouth open. WooshWheeWooshwee the TARDIS disappeared.
“How was your day?” my mother asked, finally returned to earth.
“Fine” I replied. “Have you ever noticed how cosmic the Tardis is?”
For Whovians, my very first fan-fiction.
Kassi G.
Copyright 2015 Kassi G. All Rights Reserved
well i wanted to like this post, but it won’t let me. there must be something cosmically wrong here! i too am a dr who fan who only watches via netflix. so despite what the doctor may say, it is a small world after all.
p.s. i actually got around to reading a number of the posts which makes me happy. see you on tuesday.
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🙂 Love! ❤
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Sounds like my kind of series…Great Story!
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Dr Who? Mass and I enjoy it. She is a super fan!
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I am a Whovian myself 🙂 I see you enjoyed David Tennant’s go at the Doctor. Nice job.
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I like them all. I did enjoy David Tennant’s Dr, but Kassi’s fav is Matt…Smith right? #11
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I loved Matt Smith although I, like most, had to ease into him. But I was devastated when he left. BUT I think Peter Capaldi is a better fit for Clara Oswald as I felt like she was a poor rebound from the loss of the Ponds’s.
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I agree. I haven’t watched Peter yet as we do not have regular TV…only Netflix. Ahhh!!!
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Oh rats! Well, not having regular television isn’t a bad thing, but I think netflix is not going to be carrying BBC shows like Doctor Who anymore. I read something a while back on it but I never heard the conclusion. Alas, the library generally caries copies of the series I believe so all is not lost 😀
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That’s a big POOOOO on Netflix if that’s the case. I’m a BBC addict. I love my BBC Masterpiece PBS Classic Novels made into miniseries! 😦 I also love DR Who. 😦 😦 I hope that doesn’t happen. So far he’s still available.
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Hopefully they have turned from their wicked ways, and worked out whatever issue had arisen between them. And should that be the case, then there will be no need for Pooing on them 😛
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LOL That is true. I shouldn’t jump the gun!
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No , none of us should. In this you are not alone. 😀
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I love Doctor Whooo!! ❤ Well done, Kass!
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Yes, she and I are a little bit of the fans of the Doctor. 🙂
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Not a Doctor Who fan (though I am tempted to watch it and see what all the fuss is abuot ) but I still enjoyed the story. I like the pen that could be a bit more sonic. 🙂
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I accidentally clicked the little down hand. I can’t seem to get it to remove. Oops! Anyway, you should give it a shot. 🙂 that sonic pen is actually a sonic screwdriver. The Doctor doesn’t use a gun and his screwdriver is very useful for opening just about anything as well as being sonic. 🙂
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Sounds intriguing 🙂 A screwdriver like that must be very handy.
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Yes, it’s all he ever needs! 🙂
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Doctor Who. Fantastic!!! 🙂
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One can’t go wrong with Dr Who. 🙂
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Fun! Have loved ‘Doctor Who’ since I was a kid! Especially liked the “It could be a little more sonic” line.
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Me, too, Marnie! I started watching with my dad when I was about four. Haha Kass and I are a lot nerdy when it comes to the Doctor. She will love that she liked that line! 🙂
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Oops that you liked that line. Haha
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Delightful! I’ve never been a follower of Dr. Who, but had watched a season many, many years ago. This is koooooooool. 😀 😀
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Haha, Tess, you sounded like the 11th Dr in my head. He says “Fezzes are cooool,” and “bowties are cooool.” Ha
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😀 😀
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Liked this! Will be watching out for the Doctor here in the UK!
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He tends to hang out in your neck of the woods far more often than ours. (I like that I’m the author’s mom, so that makes me MARTHA JONES! How cool is that?!)
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Lol!
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IKR!!! 🙂 🙂 >o< Bowties are cool!! ~Kassi
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haha, Kassi, you are funny my girlo!
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