#BlogBattle 24 “Troop” Entries & Voting

#BlogBattle 24 Story Theme: Troop

(basic rules at the bottom of the post)

Look for everyone’s stories using #BlogBattle on Twitter, too! Wednesday, the poll gets added. Be sure to read them all. All the links will open in a new window so that you can easily navigate back to this list.

RULES for VOTING: Anyone can vote as long as you’ve read ALL the stories for this week by 10 PM PDT, SUNDAY. Vote for your TOP 3 favorites. Winner announced on Monday! (With as many great stories as get submitted, I think we all need just a little more time to read them and vote!)


Comedy:

Elite Troop 509 by Karl @ Ssenlrak

Living the Star Wars Dream by Blonde(Lucy)WriteMore


Fantasy:

*** Opportunities by David @ SonWorshiper

Waiting by PhoenixGrey85

Going Under by E. Rawls

One at a Time, Please by Lauren Gunter


Inspirational:

Problems with Paratroops by Andrew @ Blessed are the Pure in Heart

Golaso by Kristin @ Pursuit of a New Adventure

Super Trooper Breakfast by Orana Velarde


Mystery/Crime:

Of a Brother’s Keeper by Beaton M @ Becoming the Muse (Of Possible Body Snatchers, too!)


Romance:


Science Fiction:

Much Needed Repairs by Claire Banschbach

Oasis of Mars: Final Troop by Rachael Ritchey


Action/Thriller/Suspense:

The Resistance by Sarah Brentyn @ Lemon Shark Reef


Western:


PS If I’m missing your story, just leave me a comment to let me know!


Anyone, regardless of participation, who reads ALL the stories for the week may vote.

PLEASE VOTE for your top THREE favorites (not all for the same, though!).

Vote by 10 PM PST on Sunday so I can announce the winner on Monday Thank you so much. I enjoy our weekly stories a great deal, and I hope you do, too!


Rules:

  1. 1000 words max
  2. fictional tale (or true if you really want)
  3. PG (no more than PG-13) Content – let’s keep this family friendly!
  4. Your story must contain the word(s) from the theme and/or be centered around the theme in a way that shows it is clearly related
  5. Go for the entertainment value!
  6. State the Genre of your story at the top of your post.
  7. Post your story on Tuesday, by 11:59 PM PST
  8. Use the hashtag #BlogBattle when tweeting your story, put a linkback to your #BlogBattle Short Story in the comments section of this page, and/orinclude a link to this page in your own blog post(it creates a “ping-back” which will alert me and our friends to your #BlogBattle post)
  9. Have fun!

Each winner will receive this awesome #BlogBattle Winner Badge to display with their winning story on their webpage:

BlogBattle award 1

59 responses to “#BlogBattle 24 “Troop” Entries & Voting”

  1. phoenixgrey85 Avatar
    phoenixgrey85

    I noticed that other people seem to have put a genre on their posts this week. is that something we’re supposed to be doing now? Did I miss that somehow?

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    1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

      Yeah, i put a post up on Monday that talked a little about it. I am trying something new, but don’t worry, I already know where Layla and Winter go. 😉

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      1. phoenixgrey85 Avatar
        phoenixgrey85

        Ah. I missed that one. I’ll put the genre at the top of my next post anyway. 🙂

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        1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

          Sounds good to me. 🙂

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  2. sonworshiper Avatar

    Quick question. So we know “legumes” of some sort is the word for next week. Is there anything stopping us from starting our idea for the next story? I’ve jotted down some dialogue and quick details, but I didn’t know if this is supposed to be a “start when the new battle is announced” thing.

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    1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

      Great question! We only post on Tuesdays but you are welcome to start your story as soon as the next word comes available. Or there is the option I tend to go with: procrastination. 😉

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  3. Carrie Ann Avatar

    I sure hate that the Romance Genre is empty, you know that would have been my slot lol. I was so close to getting something together this week, but with school starting my time and my mind are occupied by that. Hope to be back at it next week…but what the heck are legumes? 🙂 Hope I can at least get to read the stories this week, missed out on that last week :(.

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    1. Andrew Budek-Schmeisser Avatar

      A legume is a perfume specifically designed for the feet…isn’t it?

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      1. Lauren Avatar
        Lauren

        Err, actually I believe it’s a type of bean. Peanuts, peas, etc. 🙂

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        1. Andrew Budek-Schmeisser Avatar

          Oops.

          Well, my wife doesn’t call me Mongo the Magnificent without reason…

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          1. Lauren Avatar
            Lauren

            Who’da thought there’d be so many puns around here?!? XD

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            1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

              Puns make the world go round. They are a common language of nerdery. 😉

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        2. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

          Haha This conversation makes the word all worth it. 🙂

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    2. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

      I hoped you’d give us a Romance this week! 😉 That’s okay. We’re back to school next week. I’m not looking forward to it. Haha Legumes are basically pod plants…peas, beans, that sort of thing. Good luck! Ha

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  4. Beaton Avatar

    Hi I love the genre layout but I have to admit I struggle with cataloging. Is there a limit to the number of entries you can do I have a “cute” lil flashfiction inspired by the theme on my blog.

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    1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

      I understand. Many stories could fit under more than one genre category, so picking the most obvious one is all I’d like. It’s only one entry per week, but just let me know which you’d prefer to use since you posted both yesterday. 🙂

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      1. Beaton Avatar

        cool 🙂
        and will go with the one already up there haha the other was more me having fun with ants

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        1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

          🙂 I can list it next to your other one so people know it’s related. 🙂

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          1. Beaton Avatar

            that would rock 🙂

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  5. […] time this week to work on a short story I’ve been trying to finish, and to actually get my #BlogBattle in on […]

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    1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

      Like: Comedy, Inspirational, Mystery/Crime, Suspense/Thriller, Scifi, fantasy, romance, etc.

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      1. Andrew Budek-Schmeisser Avatar

        Oh…well, The Dude is his OWN genre, then, don’t you think?

        I have absolutely no idea what category these stories fit. Certainly not military fiction, definitely not suspense, and while it’s about a sort of love, I don’t think romance gives quite the right impression…

        Inspirational, I guess.That will have to do.

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        1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

          That was my first thought, but wanted to check with you. I didn’t want to get to technical with genre categories, but I wanted to give the battle some kind of organization. We’ll see how it goes. I’m always inspired by your stories and yourself. ❤

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          1. Andrew Budek-Schmeisser Avatar

            Rachael, thank you so much…you may want to know that today was both trying and rather frightening. I was not sure I would make it to now, alive.

            I’ve rallied to give The Dude another story to tell; God gave me the strength, but I’m bleeding internally, and must get horizontal soon.

            You can speak for me on choice of genre anytime…and on other things, too. In our brief acquaintance, I have learned that you are a woman of honour. I trust you.

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            1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

              Oh, Andrew! I think about you daily and I’m so thankful that our paths have crossed. You go get some rest. The Dude will forever live in my heart and mind. I feel incredibly blessed to have you a part of the battles and sharing these stories with us. ❤

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            2. Andrew Budek-Schmeisser Avatar

              I was waiting for your reply, Rachael; I am truly thankful as well.

              Now, to rest. I have a Pit Bull for my pillow.

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            3. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

              perfect pillow! 🙂

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  6. Candice Avatar

    I like what you are doing with separating the genres. Alas, I shall have to bow out this week. I got a little behind on other things today and need to play catch up. Not complaining. Everything happens for a reason! Cheers! 😀

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    1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

      BOOOO! I cannot like this comment, Candice, but I shall continue to be a devoted fan of your work. ❤ I hope you get caught up and don't feel too overwhelmed! If you find the time throughout the week, make sure to read the stories and vote still. ❤

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      1. Candice Avatar

        Awww thank you. I have to finish another chapter and get some reading done that I should have done hours ago…sigh. I will definitely have something for Legumes. Curious word to use for creative inspiration.

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        1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

          I understand from the depths of my writer soul! 🙂 Isn’t it, though?

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          1. Candice Avatar

            LOL Yes it is. I wonder what people will come up with. Spaghetti proved to be a good one…but then food generally is. We all eat it :p

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            1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

              LOL here come the fun puns again! ha!

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    2. Beaton Avatar

      You are not in this week and Nooooooooo he dies????
      ~B

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      1. Candice Avatar

        I will be back next week! And are you asking about Doro? Hmmmm

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        1. Beaton Avatar

          see you next week ^_^
          obviously 🙂

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          1. Candice Avatar

            I will be reading everyone else stories so I will be present that way. 🙂

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            1. Beaton Avatar

              why you let me get attached to Doro though why????

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            2. Candice Avatar

              …you remind me of my dear friend Lisa who felt the same way and all I could think is Doro was a super villain he tormented his children lol. I for one celebrated his demise. I hope that doesn’t prevent you from reading on.

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            3. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

              😀 She has a way with words.

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  7. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

    Not quite the 11th hour, but close. You almost got me. I love a challenge but I didn’t think I’d be writing this one. Couldn’t think of anything then this hit me. I love the idea, not sure about the execution. Har.

    The Resistance

    Sorry… Still unsure where to post the link. This page? The main page?

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    1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

      You’re good here. I actually get a “pingback” automatically when you put a link to my blog on your post. It works most of the time. It’s rare when I don’t get the pingback. Looking forward to reading! 🙂

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    2. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

      Did you decide on a genre for your story?

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    3. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

      Can I call it suspense/thriller? hehe

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      1. Sarah Brentyn Avatar
        1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

          Perfect! 🙂 Loved it, btw!

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          1. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

            Thanks. And thank you for the challenge.

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            1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

              Pleasure! Next week, be on the look our for LEGUMES! For now, happy reading. 🙂

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  11. sonworshiper Avatar

    I put up a fantasy entry here: https://sonworshiper.wordpress.com/2015/08/25/opportunities/
    It’s my first time participating, and I enjoyed the opportunity (hehe no pun intended).
    Not sure what you meant by a blurb for a “battler page” though.

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    1. Rachael Ritchey Avatar

      Welcome to the battle! 🙂 We are happy to have you. I’ll be adding your story to the entries post in a little while, and I’ll also be making you your very own “Battler Page” that will list links to all your Blog Battle stories. I’d like to add a short few sentences to it, introducing you to whoever happens to look at it. 🙂

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