Grecca & Musk

BlogBattle 19 Theme: Musk

Hundreds of years in the future. Grecca- a young woman with an attitude. As spoiled and famous as she is, she’s still a girl who deep down wants what we all want: love and respect from the people she holds most dear. She doesn’t look to her future because it doesn’t seem to matter, but she’s in love with a past, a time when she thinks things must have been different. Her family, though, is integral to the present time and in ways she doesn’t fully understand. The more she learns, the more her life changes in ways she can never undo or take back.

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The tinting of the windows in the car was turned up to the highest level which meant people couldn’t see in and Grecca couldn’t see out. The visor between the front seat and the back where she sat was also set at high opaqueness. She was in a moving box and at Ariston’s mercy. Who knew why she trusted him.

A holoscreen slid down in front of Grecca. She leaned back and scratched her shoulder where the material of her “new” jumpsuit irritated her skin.

“What exactly am I going to see here, Ariston?”

“It’s a historical video, something to help me explain the situation you’re in.”

Grecca raised her eyebrows but didn’t say anything. She pressed the air next to the screen, and the video started playing.

“Old Rockets? What does this have to do with me? I know next to nothing about rocket and space travel history.”

“Doesn’t matter what you know. You’re a direct descendant of the man with the vision to get us into space. This dates back to when Elon Musk started making leaps and bounds in commercializing space travel. It was rudimentary compared to what we have now, but your family has played a huge part in getting us where we are today, good and bad.”

“What’s your point?”

“The point is, you were high-profile before you were ever born. You’re father didn’t marry your mother just because she was beautiful. She’s the last in a long line of Musks who’ve carried the family business forward. Your father wanted to control the empire they built.”

“My father is not the best dad in the universe, but are you saying he’s a gold-digger?”

“Do you even know what that term means?”

“I studied early millennial culture for three years, Aries. Yes, I know what a gold-digger is.”

“Just surprised is all. Most people don’t care about our history or how we ended up where we are today.”

“There was never a question for me. I’m a little obsessed with the turn of the century. Life was so different then. The world was angry and boiling, ready to pull itself apart.”

“And it did, at least partially. The ruination brought on by several wars across the globe was devastating, but it brought unity to some peoples and places. Rebuilding was a task beyond imagining. We’re lucky to have not had to live through that time, Grecca.”

“For a chauffeur you sure do know a lot about history. I get the feeling you’re about as deep into the forbidden histories as I am. So, instead of telling me what I already know, tell me what I need to know.”

They turned a corner. The abruptness of the change tipped Grecca to the side. She slid forward when Ariston stopped the car with almost as much force as he’d turned the corner.

“Hey, watch it!”

She righted herself and glared at the divider. It dissipated, opening the space between them.

Ariston unbuckled and twisted in the seat. “Grecca, I want to tell you everything, but there are things you’re just not ready to know, and I can’t put your life at risk by telling you too much.”

“Tell me why Red wants my eyes.”

Grecca watched Ariston’s internal struggle play across his face. He opened his mouth and closed it several times.

“They are a key.”

“That’s what she said. What does it mean? A key to what? She was willing to kill me to get them if I didn’t cooperate. I’m seriously at a loss here as to how I should feel.”

“You’re doing fine, Grecca. Better than I expected.”

“My brain’s about to explode with questions, Aries, so just answer.”

“Right. Grecca, when your mother became ill and your father took over as head the family business you were just a baby.”

“How would you know any of that? You’re barely older than me.”

“I’ve done my homework. Listen,  I don’t have a lot of time here. Your father decided the best way to protect the most important family secrets was to install an old-fashioned locking system, which includes retinal scans.”

“You mean using the retinas of my eyes in place of gene-coders? How is that better? Aren’t there easy ways to copy my retinas?”

“Your father went old-school, as they used to say. The tech is so out-dated our newer stuff can’t even touch it. Today’s tech has no way to interpret and override, which was ingenious on your father’s part. It takes your eye and only your eye. It has to be alive in order to read, so if she’d followed through on her threat she’d never have gotten what she wanted.”

Grecca gripped her head and closed her eyes. It was all too much. One simple question.


“I’m fine. Just shut up a second.” She took a deep breath, the thought of the frog dagger tucked into her handbag bringing back memories. Grecca’s eyes popped open. “She almost killed me anyway. Is there another way in? What if, what if something did happen to me? Then what would my father do?”

“You’re it, Grecca. The last line of defense against secrets able to finish off the world. If things in that vault got into the wrong hands, life on earth would soon be over.

“You’re father isn’t a gold-digger. He married your mother because they shared a vision and she trusted him like no other. He’s put all his trust for the future in you.

“If you died, Grecca, or fell in to the wrong hands then he’s set in place a back-up plan to destroy it all, in effect losing hundreds of years of advancement and history. I think he sees himself as a protector of the past and future. Probably where you get that curiosity from.”

“So what do you have to do with any of this?”

“It’s complicated.”

“Really? I hadn’t noticed.”

“Grecca, I want to explain, but I can’t. Now, it’s time I got you home before any more suspicion arises.”

Ariston turned in the seat and the opaque screen resumed between, leaving Grecca just as much in the dark but a whole lot more curious than she was before.


This is a totally fictional tale, aside from Elon Musk. He is a current, real world icon for technology and advancement. My hope in including him in my fictional story was to show full respect to his creativity, drive, determination, and genius, just like if I’d used Einstein as part of a historic fictional story. 🙂 

31 responses to “Grecca & Musk”

  1. Wow…not too much pressure for Grecca. 🙂 Loved all of this…the video, how you incorporated Elon Musk, and how our present day technology is their old-school…and I continue to love Ariston!! ❤

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    1. Thanks, Carrie Ann. 🙂 I’m liking the story more and more, but it’s also pushing me way outside my comfort zone, so that’s a good thing! I’m glad you love Ariston. I’m rather partial to him. Hopefully we’ll get to know him better in time and just love him more, too. 😀

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  2. This has triggered my curiosity, Rachael. Oh, the eyes bit was a bit creepy!

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    1. Oh goodie! Glad it worked to draw you in a little. 🙂 Yeah, previously red dress lady told her all she needed was Grecca’s eyes. Haha She’s creepy.

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  3. I liked the thoughts and emotions Grecca went through in this one; the fear of losing her eyes, as they are the key–she herself is the key! Ah, the suspense! I really liked learning about the history too. Nice work! Musk was a fun word. 🙂

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    1. Thanks, E! 🙂 I’m trying to weave in history without blathering on about it. 😉 Musk was good!

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      1. I like your non-blathering approach! And the video was fun. 😀

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  4. phoenixgrey85 Avatar

    It’s getting more and more intriguing each time. I haven’t heard of Elon Musk before – research required I think. There’s a lot of weight being put on Grecca’s shoulders, and by the sounds of it, there’s more to come. I think she’s starting to think beyond the superficial things in life, but I hope she doesn’t lose her sense of fun completely. 🙂

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    1. It’s hard to imagine her without her sense of fun! I hope to get some of that back and balance it with a new maturity. 🙂 We’ll see if I’m up for the challenge!

      Elon Musk…Ahhh, be careful as you research. He’s an intriguing fellow and there’s something about him that’s very drawing as you watch him speak (and I’m not talking about his upper lip which barely moves). I spent several more hours than necessary ‘researching’ him and still find myself curious to watch more. It’s really kinda weird.

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      1. phoenixgrey85 Avatar

        Hm. I’m even more curious now.

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        1. He’s all over YouTube. Have fun!

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  5. So you leave the infuriated fans banging on the door huh?
    Dis vas goot!

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    1. Haha I suppose so! Thank you! 🙂 I hope the fans don’t get hurt banging on the door, though! 😉


  6. Another great chapter to this story. It just gets richer and richer. 😀

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    1. Thanks Candice. 🙂 I guess it’s just a lot of fun to see where the battle will take us. “Musk” was totally random but it offered an opportunity to fit right into the building of history for the story. haha


  7. I really like this! Love the character of Ariston – everyone needs him in their life. Sort of paternal figure. In this story I found myself feeling sorry for Grecca, lots of unanswered questions and a bit of fear creeping in with the eyes. Good job Rach!

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    1. Thank you! Appreciate the insight. Sadly, Ariston is stuck in that role ’cause he cares and is trapped between what he wants to do and what he supposed to do. And where Grecca hasn’t had a great male role model in her life, he certainly stands out in her mind even if she doesn’t know how or why. I wish I had more space to answer questions this week, but I ran out of word count. haha (excuses?)

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      1. It’s starting to take shape and I liked the fear / insecurity of Grecca – I started to understand why she behaves the way she does. I want to mother her and take her aside!

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        1. She could use a mum like you.


  8. Ooooooooh!!! It’s Tuesday again!!! Time is FLYING!!! Nice touch with the video and the shout out to Elon Musk! Very creative!!! Love it!!!

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    1. Thanks jahaira! Times sure is slipping by like hourglass sand! How are you feeling?


      1. Definitely! Been taking it easy, so I am going a little bonkers, but I am good. Thank you for asking. How are u doing?

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        1. It’s good you’re taking it easy! You’ve got some boys to pamper you, too. 🙂 I’m doing well. I have too much on my plate, but in the scheme of things I’m reminded of all the talented, driven, and successful people who do far more in a day than I ever do. 🙂 No complaints here!


          1. There are people that don’t sleep! Just as long as you make sure that you are healthy, it’s all good. I do wish you lots of success! 😀

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            1. It’s true. They are burning the candle at both ends then. I am trying. I’m not exercising like I should, and I’m not eating well, and I’m only sleeping about six hours a night…yeahhhh, not too healthy. haha Next week?
              THANK YOU! 🙂


            2. Hey, I think then you maybe rearrange a little, see if u can still do things without sacrificing your health. Eating well for some reason is one of the hardest things. And it’s hard to sleep with things on your mind! Maybe you should arrange a day off every week, I don’t know. But take care of yourself, OK? You don’t want me to go over there and spoon feed you, lol. ☺

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            3. LOL No, probably not. I did take Sunday off. We went to church and then swimming at the lake near my grandma’s. 🙂 I’m getting some time off even though I shouldn’t until I’m done. Thanks for reminding me to be better about it, though!


            4. 😁sounds like you had fun! Glad to hear it! No prob, that’s what friends are for.

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