So, I’ve written a screenplay for The Beauty Thief, y’all!

And in honor of this new format for my beloved tale of love, chivalry, adventure and devotion, I have decided to once again tackle the log line for the story!

I have three here that I’d love your input on.

OR if you’re as daring as my prince, you might want to try your hand at making one of these even better.

OR maybe you have read The Beauty Thief and you have an idea for a great log line?

Oh my! The journey is always a thrill. Thanks for taking it with me.

1. When a radiant princess’s beauty is stolen by an ancient thief, her betrothed, a daring and valorous prince, must choose to risk life and kingdom to break the curse before her fate is sealed forever.
2. A virtuous princess’s beauty is stolen by an ancient thief on the eve of her wedding to the daring high prince who will risk life and kingdom to break the curse before her fate is sealed.
3. A daring prince faces every obstacle and trial imaginable, risking [everything] to rescue his innocent bride’s pure heart from an ancient thief whose obsession with eternal life has grown insatiable.  (in place of “everything” could also go “…life and kingdom,”)

Dare I mention which is my favorite? I just know that as a writer, when I’m open to feedback and criticism I can be so much better.